I'm loving it

Slogan challenge Mcdonald
/ Rina Does this revised edition work? :)
Lol. The asides aren't going, (devil in the details and all that!) but I did incorporate product in first verse.

I'm loving it

I'm loving it this piping hot
Hamburger
So foreign  and juicy,
Bland and crusty
On my Indian tongue
(Can only recall how with fire and spices
my days had once begun!)
Golden bouquet of French fries
(Your conquistador lies
Ruminations of your last conquest
Chewing upon
The breakage of old ties)
Feelings of supreme satiety
A double mac and I'm just ready to die
Happy meals plus a new toy l can pick
It's a wrap and I almost cry.

I'm loving it
I've broken free of you
Torn through shackles 
Of impossible imposition.
Seen the fake
Gilded cage offers no protection.
Ostentatious it is
Mere limbo
Of undisclosed unsure
Location
I'm loving it my dreams are  freedom
And the fairy tale happily ever after
I now no longer need
I have come to terms with
My greed.

I'm loving it and living it
Every moment is mine
Now that I am on my own
I own my life I define
And so the story goes.
I'm loving it that I'm
Loving it. ;)

(c) Amrita Valan 2015